Fantasy System

Under the leadership of An Yilunye, Mu Fan came to the lobby of Dengeki Library.

"Hi, welcome to Dengeki Bunko, what can I do for you?"

As soon as the two entered the lobby of Dengeki Library, the front desk lady who was in charge of the front desk wearing a black uniform came over and asked An Yilun and Mu Fan with a smile on her face.

"excuse me."

Ai Lun will also smile: "I have already made an appointment to be the editor of Kagurazaka Iris. Is she in the company now?"

"please wait for a moment."

The lady working at the front desk turned around, picked up the phone and dialed a number, and after asking for a while, she apologized to An Yilun and Mu Fan, "I'm sorry, the editor of Kagurazaka is in a meeting right now. , her office is on the seventh floor, you can go to the reception room on the seventh floor and wait for her, the meeting will be over in a few minutes."

"Okay, thank you, let's go now."

"You're welcome!"

.....

After An Yilun also thanked him, he led Mu Fan into the elevator and pressed the button leading to the seventh floor.

"Lun Ye, what kind of person is the Kagurazaka editor you're talking about?" After the elevator doors closed, Mu Fan remembered the editor's name that An Yi Lun Ye had just mentioned, and couldn't help asking.

Hearing Mu Fan's question, An Yilun also asked in surprise: "Mu Fan, are you really Mengxin breaking into the light novel world for the first time? You haven't heard of the name Kagurazaka Iris?"

"Um."

Mu Fan nodded. Speaking of which, when he was in Tianchao, he mainly wrote two-dimensional novels, but it is indeed the first time for him to break into the world of light novels when he comes to this world.

This is the same as the best-selling light novels in this world that he has never heard of, and the editors of light novels in this world are also names that he has never heard of.

An Yilun also explained: "Kagurazaka Iris, a well-known editor of Dengeki Bunko, is responsible for some popular works. For example, the author of the best-selling novel in the light novel world "Fantasy Demon Sword" is solely in charge of her."

"It turned out to be the editor in charge of the best-selling light novel."

Mu Fan was a little surprised, he didn't expect An Yilun to know such an excellent editor of Dengeki Bunko, but although this editor is relatively excellent, being his editor is completely enough. Ke Mufan has one more thing to worry about.

"Then such an editor doesn't care about the book of a newcomer like me?"

Mu Fan said that Mengxin was trembling. In his memory, some editors who were in charge of achievements were very cold. Although the editors were very good, if they thought he was a newcomer and didn't pay much attention to him, then when he was doing something in the future, he had to be careful. Much trouble.

"Won't."

An Yilun also shook her head, and explained with a smile: "Ms. Kagurazaka is a very easy-going editor. As long as she thinks that the works can be submitted, she will be responsible for them seriously. With Mu Fan, your "Accelerated World" The degree of splendor will definitely pass Dengeki Bunko's review."

"That's good."

Mu Fan secretly heaved a sigh of relief. A good editor is worth a thousand dollars. Mu Fan doesn't expect so much, he just hopes that it won't be too bad.

At this time, the door of the elevator had already opened, and An Yilun led Mu Fan out of the elevator and entered the editor's reception room.

The layout of the editing reception room is very simple, a clean and tidy desk and four soft chairs.

Since the Kagurazaka editor hadn't finished the meeting, Mu Fan and An Yilun simply sat on the chairs beside them and waited quietly.

Not long after, there was a sound of footsteps, Mu Fan raised his head, and a tall beauty who looked to be in her twenties, wearing a professional OL uniform, and short hair that was neatly combed to the ears, came over: "Sorry, Mr. Lunye, you have been really busy recently, because you have been in charge of many popular works, so you two have been waiting for a long time."

"It's okay, we've only just come here.

"

An Yilun also stood up and said with a smile.

"Is this the author of "Accelerated World" that Mr. Lun Ye mentioned earlier, Mr. Mu Fan?"

After Kagurazaka Iris said hello, she looked at Mu Fan beside An Yilun with a little surprise and asked.

Iris Kagurazaka knew An Yilun, who is a popular blogger, since An Yilun also recommended Mu Fan to her, and she received a 30,000-word "Acceleration World" from An Yilun. Manuscript.

In the industry, An Yilun is also very conscientious in recommending light novels and animations, so he has accumulated a lot of popularity, so in the opinion of Kagurazaka Iris, the works that can be recommended by An Yilun must have some bright spots .

Next, Kagurazaka Iris only read the first 30,000 characters of Accelerated World, and felt the extraordinaryness of this book.

The writing method of "Accelerated World" is completely different from other game novels, and it is more inclined to the category of science fiction future, but it can be called this year's potential work in terms of writing and plot changes.

So out of anticipation, she also eagerly wants to watch the next plot.

Kagurazaka Iris originally thought that Mu Fan was an older author who could write light novels of this level, but when she saw Mu Fan's immature face next to An Yilun, she couldn't help being a little surprised.

Mu Fan looks like he should be in the same grade as An Yilun, right?

However, some of the authors she is in charge of are best-selling light novels written by high school students. For example, Senshou Murakami of "Fantasy Demon Sword" is one of them. She has been an editor for so many years, and she is only slightly surprised by this. That's all.

"Well, hello Ms. Kagurazaka, just call me Mu Fan. Besides, I'm going to participate in this year's Dengeki Bunko Novel Awards." Mu Fan stood up and smiled lightly.

"Did you bring the rest of the manuscript?"

"Brought it."

Mu Fan opened the backpack, took out the printed manuscript of "Accelerated World" and handed it to Kagurazaka Iris: "It's all here."

Kagurazaka Iris took the manuscript with both hands and put it on the table, then turned around and took two cans of Coke from the side freezer, and placed them in front of Mu Fan and An Yilunye.

"Can two Cokes be okay?"

"Okay, thank you."

"Okay, then please wait a moment. I'll take a look at the plot behind it." Kagurazaka Iris began to sit on the chair on the other side of Mu Fan and An Yilunya, carefully reading the plot behind "Accelerated World" .

An Yilun and Mu Fan, who came all the way, were also a little tired, and they didn't pretend to be. Taking advantage of Kagurazaka's calamus review, they directly pulled the pull tab of the Coke, took a big sip, and relieved the pain. Quenched my own thirst.

Seeing that Kagurazaka Iris was carefully reviewing the manuscript, out of politeness, Mu Fan and An Yilun did not speak, but sat on the other side quietly waiting for Kagurazaka Iris to finish reviewing.

In the entire room, apart from the cold air-conditioning atmosphere, there was only the sound of three people breathing.

On the other hand, Kagurazaka Iris read the follow-up plot of "Accelerated World", and he admired the excellence of this light novel more and more in his heart. Although this novel was slightly insufficient because the main character was a fat man at the beginning, it is estimated that this kind of beginning will affect many people. People have unexpected persuasion effects.

But then, the plot progresses step by step, never procrastinating, usually relaxed and cheerful in daily life, and never playing tricks to interrupt at the critical moment, and the description of the battle is also very passionate and vivid, the most important thing is that everyone's character is described very Individually .

In light novels, a series of likable characters will appear in some works, that is, the so-called "stock buying" and "selling" and "crash" that have caused controversy.

So in a lightly edited animation, someone will post "This is my wife!" and "Your wife is in my arms!", "I have read your wife's book!" and "Your wife is awesome!" .

In the light novel world, it appears every year, the favorite "ranking of two-dimensional male and female protagonists".

Of course, these are all based on the characterization of a work. In a light novel, you can have a slightly insufficient plot, or you can develop an unscientific development, but the characters in the work must have distinct personalities and be liked.

In a light novel, the characters you portray are annoying to readers, so what is the success?

"Accelerated World" does this very well: the stable and generous Kuroyukihime, the lively and lovely Xiaoqian, and Haruyuki who has grown from cowardly to strong, can all prove the success of this novel in terms of character creation.

Although the setting seems a bit difficult, it can be simply described as an inspirational story of a cowardly knight becoming stronger little by little in order to protect his beloved princess!

A light novel that is simple but not lacking in fun.

Seeing this, Kagurazaka Iris couldn't help looking at Mu Fan with weird eyes. If Mu Fan wasn't in front of her right now, she would really be suspicious.

The author of this novel, Mu Fan, is he... really only seventeen years old?