Life of Debauchery with Harem of Goddesses
Chapter 57: Feedback - Volume 1
Hey guys, Indian Rake is here and now you have read volume 1 let's talk about how feel about certain things in the novel.
1. Your thoughts on MC, Karan, and what can I improve?
2. Your thoughts on plot and what can I improve?
3. Your thoughts on characters, your favorite ones and what can I improve?
4. Your thoughts on fight scenes and what can I improve?
5. Your thoughts on sex scenes and what can I improve/
6. And please comment on whatever topic you want to talk about. Want to ask question about some things? Then please do.
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